Tuanzai relin an sawi Phawngpui tlanga’n,
Riahrun sawnin tlang lawn zai kan rel e;
Zothlifim leng vel hah tidam tura’n,
Thaw heuh heuh, hlim ten dawn zai kan rel e.
Khua chuan, hawi velin romei lo zam e,
Hring len vangkhua leh raltiang tlang thliri’n;
Chawngpereng tel lo, hlimzai kan vawr e,
‘D’ tel ve lo, hlim te a, lam thaii’n.
Tlangbawm Chhawkhlei par leh Nauban parte,
Vul zai a rel, par an chhuah tlang mawia’n;
Tel ve lo ‘D’ tan thliah ka nuam ngei e,
Thliah rem lo par, vul reng la tlang mawia’n
Kan tuanna Farpak, Phawngpui tlang kha maw,
Tialpari puk nen tawn leh ni awm maw?
Rhyme: abab cdcd efef gg
Iambic Pentameter
Dt. 24th March, 2012
Khai a, a va han mawi em em ve. Good job.
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